hey man i like ur profile but some of the words are not connecting in copy writing thoughts written in ur profile,,, so correct it,
The ad u have given is good but have lot of chances to improve it think something different,,,coz wat u think was normal thought ,,, ad should be appeal the target,,,
A passionate writer who loves to play, express and convince with words; My work involves ideating, conceptualising and crafting copy for print, radio, TV, outdoor, web and direct advertising.
A man wakes up after sleeping
under an advertised blanket,
on an advertised mattress,
pulls off advertised pajamas,
bathes in an advertised shower,
shaves with an advertised razor,
brushes his teeth with advertised toothpaste,
washes with advertised soap,
puts on advertised clothes,
drinks a cup of advertised coffee,
drives to work in an advertised car,
and then, refuses to advertise,
believing it doesn't pay.
Later when business is poor,
he advertises it for sale.
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hey
man i like ur profile but some of the words are not connecting in copy writing thoughts written in ur profile,,, so correct it,
The ad u have given is good but have lot of chances to improve it
think something different,,,coz wat u think was normal thought ,,, ad should be appeal the target,,,
be creative in copy
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